Fossil SCM

Another bit of prose polishing in fossil-v-git

wyoung 2019-07-14 11:37 UTC bsd-vs-gpl
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[https://www.kernel.org/|the Linux kernel], and
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[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/D._Richard_Hipp|D. Richard Hipp] designed
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Fossil to support the development of [https://sqlite.org/|SQLite].
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SQLite is much more widely deployed than the Linux kernel, but for
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Linux-based systems, the kernel is the more fundamental component.
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-Although both projects must rank high on any objective list of "most
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-important FOSS projects," the two projects are almost entirely unlike
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+Both projects must rank high on any objective list of "most
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+important FOSS projects," yet these two projects are almost entirely unlike
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one another.
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-In the following three sections, we will explain the key differences in
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-Linux vs. SQLite which affected the designed-in low-friction usage path
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-for the DVCSes created to support each one's development.
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+In the following sections, we will explain how three key differences
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+between Linux and SQLite dictated the design of each DVCS's low-friction
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+usage path.
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When deciding between these two DVCSes, you should ask yourself, "Is my
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project more like Linux or more like SQLite?"
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--- www/fossil-v-git.wiki
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129 [https://www.kernel.org/|the Linux kernel], and
130 [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/D._Richard_Hipp|D. Richard Hipp] designed
131 Fossil to support the development of [https://sqlite.org/|SQLite].
132 SQLite is much more widely deployed than the Linux kernel, but for
133 Linux-based systems, the kernel is the more fundamental component.
134 Although both projects must rank high on any objective list of "most
135 important FOSS projects," the two projects are almost entirely unlike
136 one another.
137
138 In the following three sections, we will explain the key differences in
139 Linux vs. SQLite which affected the designed-in low-friction usage path
140 for the DVCSes created to support each one's development.
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142 When deciding between these two DVCSes, you should ask yourself, "Is my
143 project more like Linux or more like SQLite?"
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--- www/fossil-v-git.wiki
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@@ -129,17 +129,17 @@
129 [https://www.kernel.org/|the Linux kernel], and
130 [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/D._Richard_Hipp|D. Richard Hipp] designed
131 Fossil to support the development of [https://sqlite.org/|SQLite].
132 SQLite is much more widely deployed than the Linux kernel, but for
133 Linux-based systems, the kernel is the more fundamental component.
134 Both projects must rank high on any objective list of "most
135 important FOSS projects," yet these two projects are almost entirely unlike
136 one another.
137
138 In the following sections, we will explain how three key differences
139 between Linux and SQLite dictated the design of each DVCS's low-friction
140 usage path.
141
142 When deciding between these two DVCSes, you should ask yourself, "Is my
143 project more like Linux or more like SQLite?"
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